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Sonrisa S
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4/22/2002
16:52:29
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hey here's a poem I wrote a while back just
wanted to share it if my cousin hasn't already
lol
By: Sonrisa Sanchez Y Que?
"I live my life a quarter mile at a tim, when I'm
out there, for those ten
seconds..... I'm free"
Like fast and the furious,
I Pull up curious
Rollin up in my Dakota
People tellin me to move ova
But I'm gonna race
So get yo a*s out of my face
Don't clown on my sh*t
Till you see how I hit.
You can't handle this!
Fool your gonna miss,
Your winning streak,
'Cause I'm about to beat
Your Lightning heat!
Fool your car is just a P.O.S.
You gotta depend on N.O.S.
If you think that you can beat this,
Your in for a big surprise
So you better open your eyes
Cause I'm so fast I'll make you relize!
I see you ricers
Rollin' up in your Civic
Ya'll just sick.
Push your car to the limit,
Use your NOS and blow your pistons.
As you try to keep from mistin'.
Dry your tears,
Don't worry your just messin up your gears.
You lose control
As you see me roll,
past the finish line.
Ya'll break your necks,
When you watch my ride pass by
Because I'm so fast and that's no lie
Now look at you,
Your ride spun around.
See I told you not to clown,
Now your gonna be over here,
Trying to be down.
Tears on your eyes, reputation shot, feelin all
low
F*ck here comes the five-O!!
"I live my life a quarter mile at a time, when I'm
out there, for those ten
seconds...... I'm Free"
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macman37
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4/22/2002
17:33:58
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I'm speechless.
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W.Shakespeare
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4/22/2002
17:46:01
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You forgot to work "smackin' a ho" in there. Get on it.
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Jesse T.
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4/23/2002
14:30:26
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I likes, Thats tight.
Jesse T.
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Sonrisa S
Dodge Dakota
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4/23/2002
16:01:59
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thanks :D wrote it a while back actually and stuff :)
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Sonrisa S
Dodge Dakota
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7/04/2002
01:11:05
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no smackin ho's in there...
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xplikt
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7/04/2002
03:10:09
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Get rid of the quote at the bottom and top and it's perfect, seems to cliche.
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Dr. D
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7/04/2002
16:21:22
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Sonrisa S,
Have you ever thought about recording a CD?
Your rap name could be ... Rappin DAK
Dr. D
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DakotaMan2002
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7/04/2002
22:48:49
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Dude that poem is GREAT.
I'm speachless....and yet it is so true!!
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Sonrisa S
Dodge Dakota
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7/07/2002
20:39:15
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Yeah I thought about recording a cd, but don't think I am gonna have any luck in boring ass NM. Thanks for all the compliments... Yeah that line kinda has gotten a little cliched and stuff... But when I wrote it it wasn't... oh well... :)
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