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Mr.D
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9/05/2008
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Once a point a time there was man who bought a shop to start his own bussniess reparing cars and truck.
And I'll let you fill in the rest of it haha.
I'll finish the rest tomorrow
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psssst
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9/05/2008
22:11:10
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"Once a point a time"
hey dum dum
Once Upon a Time!
U idiot
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dog
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9/05/2008
22:26:14
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Hey mr D.
Go slap your english teacher for not making you learn.
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Mr.D
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9/06/2008
17:45:32
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There was a man whom bought a shop back in'05. He finaly got what he wanted after all these years, it was nestled out in a ruel community of the western part of Tennessee. And old automotive shop that had been closed since '99.
Durring the reopening of his new transmission and body shop he noticed something strange in the front office, there apeard to be a man sitting on the couch waiting for something. So the Gentleman that owner was went into the office to for service. As soon as he opened the door that connected the shop to the front office the man was already gone.
"I'll post the rest of story Monday. In the meanwhile make up your on verson to the story".
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LOL
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9/07/2008
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Mr D = Mr Dum Dum
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Mr.D
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9/08/2008
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And now the rest of the story.
They guy's name is Jeff. He always wanted to open up his very own transmission and body shop, of course him being a dodge truck fan; he would see plenty of Ram’s-Durango, Dakotas all in line waiting to have that tranny pulled.
He really didn't think to much of the guy waiting up in the office. After all it was a hot day a couple of day's ago and after all, it could have been someone he knew right (wrong!).
A 2 months passed by since Jeff’s shop opened up for business. And he had all but forgotten about the strange occurrence; until late one night, around 10 PM when Jeff was installing a transmission after a long rebuild. He just so happened to walk by the office and glance in the half-lit room (he always would leave the desk light on) and noticed that there was and silhouette of a man sitting on the couch. But Jeff didn't catch what was going on because he was in such a rush to finally call it a day. But just he turned around and to see whom it was, the man was standing up looking out the front window and then vanished.
"Looks like I've got to be going,the final should be done latter today or tuesday. See you then."
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dakota49
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9/08/2008
18:29:44
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look who's possing as different people this time.
You have accused me of doing what you are doing.
I have never, and never will post anything other than Dakota49
Have a good day
Dakota49
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Idiot Alert
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9/10/2008
16:40:14
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"Once a point in time" (lol), an idiot named Dr. D was born. There was nobody who liked him or would play with him as a child. When he grew up--
(Please finish your story here Dr. D)
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Idiot Alert
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9/10/2008
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Sorry, I meant Mr. D. There's no way you could be a Dr.
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dakota49
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9/12/2008
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Do I have to suck you off yo hear the rest of the story?
Have a good day
Dakota49
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James LeaseMO
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9/12/2008
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Hey Idiot Alert! You couldn't be more right about Alerting people about yourself.
"Sorry, I meant Mr. D) Dummy
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Mr.D
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9/16/2008
17:28:14
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Final Chapter.
And so ole Jeff just couldn't stand what was going on any longer. He sold the shop to Dave and then took his cash and skipped town. Now that the shop is called D's. It was quite busy with peoples needing a tune up (something Jeff didn't offer), transmission rebuild and also new tires with a front end line up.
Dave was mounting a tire on a customer’s car late one night. He then herd a noise in the front office. So he put the tools down to check out what the occurrence was. To his surprise he was told about some strange and spooky stuff while striking a deal with his friend Jeff. You see Jeff and Dave known each other for 15 year or so. So he didn't just over look his friend said "just don't work alone when it gets late. It just might not be so bad" but of course who in there right mind believes in all those ghostly stuff, Dave thought to himself. So he got up and walked in the office. There was know one there but was a note on his deck which was cleared before his secretary went home.
And the note read "My name is Larry. I've been waiting for my New club cab Dodge truck to finish before my niece gets married and take a trip to the mountains in it. The torque converter went out and so I had it towed to the shop. I'm not leaving tell I get it back!!!!"
Larry.W
"Is this some type of joke" Dave thought. "Surly some one is pulling a prank" he said. And he knew that dodge no longer made a club cab pickup.
So the next he informed his secretary about the letter and handed to her. She looked and laughed out loud. "That can't be Larry Watson" She said in a very sharp tone"
"Yeah it true, he bought his truck in this very shop due to a transmission failure back in '95. He was so mad that he actually beat the cover off the steering wheel. He told us his problem, and then waited in the front office untill the shop closed. When the owner came back in to tell him that it was impossible to fix it in just one day ,they found larry already dead on the couch. The corner claimed it was a heart attach"
Dave was speechless when he herd that. "But what ever happened to his truck" Jennie (his secretary) just looked at him and said "Its still here" the red rusted truck that’s parked behind the building. It’s been there ever since.
Dave then went home turned on the TV and had a beer.
The End
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Bob B.
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9/16/2008
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Thats the best story i ever read,the rich flowing texture or meat if you will was unb3eleable.Thears genuis there,the style like a young Parry Mason. More please!!!
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STS
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9/17/2008
16:48:52
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Well think you Bob.B
Yeah It's always good to think up a good story LOL.
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Bib B
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9/18/2008
15:12:42
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STS, Your quite welcome.my hat'if i wore one'Is off to you!I was on the edge of my seat throuout the story. We at DodgeDakots.com are proud to call you a friend.Perhaps a story on the Great Pumpkin vs the Amasol man would make for some good reading!!Jeff could become a hero not unlike Huck Finn or Crockadile Dundee.I bet he could put a stop to those terriost on theEast coast. Thanks again for the spine tickling story. Your friend Bob B
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Bob B
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10/03/2008
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STS, What happened to volumn 2 of the Haunted Shop ?? What`s happened to Jeff?? Is he ok?
Your no.1 fan
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